Good stuff
If you were to split up the song into sections depending on the melody or how that part sounds, they would all sound great. But the song as a whole, all those parts put together, is not as strong as it could be. As far as how each element of the song sounds (bass, wobble, etc) it all sounds really good, much much better than your Cloak+Swagger song. The improvement from that to this, is enough for me to say that your next song is going to be great.